WHILE SHE WAS OUT
Written bySusan Montford
Based on a short story by
Edward Bryant
5th draft
December 20, 2006MAP GRIDS
From the pages of a Thomas guide converge, overlap and re-
configure across the screen. The endlessly ironic names of
American suburbs parade before us, their violet territories
marching forward like a bruise into dark green patches of
forest and wilderness.Closer in on one last map grid which fades into a
transparency of itself overlaid across the actual location of
the suburb. The name of this housing development is "Pleasant
Valley". The transparency fades out to reveal:1 1
EXT. PLEASANT VALLEY BOULEVARD - EVENING